Here was the "before":
Now that I look at it, The "before" looks more like a sketch. I'm glad I was willing to push it a little further, thanks to all the encouragement. I feel alot better. Whew! :-)
Thursday, September 24, 2009
Moving Monster-Revised
I decided to redo my moving monster piece, you can find the first attempt here. Thanks to all the feedback here and over on flickr, I was able to see what was missing. Here's what I came up with now:
Here was the "before":
Now that I look at it, The "before" looks more like a sketch. I'm glad I was willing to push it a little further, thanks to all the encouragement. I feel alot better. Whew! :-)
Here was the "before":
Now that I look at it, The "before" looks more like a sketch. I'm glad I was willing to push it a little further, thanks to all the encouragement. I feel alot better. Whew! :-)
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OMG, I love the new moving illustration! Wonderful details!
Looks way better now. So much more atmosphere. Coolio!
Ha ha! That's great, Jannie! That's gotta be you hanging on to to the monster's tail, eh?!
EXCELLENT!
The revised version is MUCH better! The monster is much more animated and I love the giant step he is taking! The police are a great addition too!
wWOWw!!! That is SoOoOoOo Go0OD! I love all that detail. Love the little police cars. The woman dangling off the tail. The little specks under the sod where the house sits and the bended tree. I also love how you did the bakground with the various colors of teal! YAY!!!
Love it! The police cars certainly underscore the point that it's a crime that you're so far away!
I really loved the first one AND then I saw the revision. Oh my, it is so cute. My favorite part of it is the bottom of the grass patch and your husband comanding the monster to move forward. Your textures in the background are really great too. LOVE it!
Hope you are enjoying Ann Arbor!
I didn't think it needed much improvemention until I saw the new version. It is so much more dynamic and narrative. I love all of the little details and colors! Awesome job!!!
I liked the first one but this new one blows it away. Great job!
Ohhhh!! This is fantastic in so many ways!!! Wonderful Jannie. :o)
i love both! ( but surprisingly first one even a little more) and now I dream about move from where I live much more!
Wow - much more dynamic! It really does make your first one look like a "rough" draft! It's quite inspiring that you followed this up.
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Hi Jannie. Take a look. The cutest interchangeable toy ever!
I'd hire The Monster Moving Co. in an instant! :)
Wow, this is so awesome! Love your style!
Cheers from Portugal!
Francisco Martins
it's totally adorable, and I like the portrait format, I feel like it makes the monster even more monstery and bigger.
Sadly, I haven't watched any new anime. I did watch the first episode of Spice & Wolf which looks interesting. Any good ones you recommend?
Are you going to sell these as moving postcards? This is just so cute!
Wow, this is epic!
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I loved the first one and I'm always loathe to overwork something but WOW you really made a good call - the new one is so much more spacial and atmospheric. Wonderful work. You inspire me Jannie :)
this is lovely!
they areee soo cutee! I love both.. huhuhuhu!
The new illustration is definitely more friendlier and fun! Adding yourself and your husband to the mix gives more insight about your feelings about the move. Good job!
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